News Layout Feedback
English Literature Feedback
Brother - home page is supposed to lead you to the important pages, but here every page except the home page can lead to to other pages. Home page should be more polished and eye catching to incentivize visiting the rest of the website. It should have some quick text that a summary of the about page. Font size for some pages should be bigger or include a brief description to fill up the empty space.
English First Peoples Feedback
Tyrus
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Make text larger
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Try to add more pictures e.g. add some pictures about Ms. Luccock classroom
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Add more space between words → change character spacing
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Add a short abstract before the link to the other articles
Brother
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Try to make some line breaks for the interview part, it is overwhelming with text
Amy Sun
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some images clash with background
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too much white space
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make more interesting
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slight inconsistencies
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too many words
